What I really enjoyed about this is the shifting of the personal pronoun all around the place until finally 'I' lets the (I) hamster out and voila: lunch :).
I’m happy to see this clever allegory thriving in the wild! Perhaps lettuce knows what we humans cannot—how sweetness will lull a hamster to bliss, leaving it prone to the eagle’s pounce.
What I really enjoyed about this is the shifting of the personal pronoun all around the place until finally 'I' lets the (I) hamster out and voila: lunch :).
Thank you kindly, L.!
I’m happy to see this clever allegory thriving in the wild! Perhaps lettuce knows what we humans cannot—how sweetness will lull a hamster to bliss, leaving it prone to the eagle’s pounce.
Thank you, Moon! I’m grateful for your kind counsel and prompt!
So clever and completely wonderful!
Thank you, Laurie!!! I appreciate you reading it.
Ooof that ending made my heart leap!
Inspired by one of Moon Kite Maker’s recent poems
Awesomeness Nora, embellish with lettuce, you’re super clever and a creative storyteller, you put a smile on my face 🤣
Bless your heart!
From lettuce to hamster to lunch, fun ride!
Thanks, Ray!
Wow! That was a ride! Thanks, Nora.
Thank you kindly, Elizabeth! Trying to make sense of it all!