This is quietly moving. The physical struggle and the care you extend are both rendered with real sensitivity. The imagined moment where dance replaces struggle was especially touching. It made my eyes water. <3
You brought so much dignity and beauty to the elderly by reminding us of their youth, dreams and grace. May she rest in eternal glory with Jesus Christ and all the angles and saints who dance on high. <3
I’m so glad it reached you, Olly!
What a tribute! There’s an intimacy here that feels true-earned and a lightness too. We should all be so lucky as to have a friend like you!
Thank you so much, Miner! Your opinion means the world to me!
This is quietly moving. The physical struggle and the care you extend are both rendered with real sensitivity. The imagined moment where dance replaces struggle was especially touching. It made my eyes water. <3
ah, thank you, Petra
<3
This is beautifully done Nora,✨you’ve captured that sense of willpower vs weakness perfectly…and the ending?
Delightfully poignant~great tribute 💛🖤😘
thank you kindly, Sea!
What a loving tribute. I could feel so much care in this!
thank you so much, Andrea! i so appreciate that
"And then, to bed, your hammock swinging toward tomorrow
rocking you in restless dreams
dressed in sunlit memories."
Loved it!!!
Thank you, Cap!
Noraaaa!!
You brought so much dignity and beauty to the elderly by reminding us of their youth, dreams and grace. May she rest in eternal glory with Jesus Christ and all the angles and saints who dance on high. <3
Oh my gosh how lovely I love that it’s her sister that comes for her this was special to me
"You will arise gracefully, gratefully
blithely joining her
in neverending dance"
The ending clutches at the heart x
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
✨ The nostalgia and dancing at the end with her sister. Felt deeply. And kudos to the carer who helped her walk and put her to bed. 🫶
Thank you, Lily!
What a gorgeous and selfless and hopeful pas de deux!
thank you, Ray!!! i appreciate that so much